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The winds of change
slowly blow on;
slowly move away these feelings,
which only time will give an outcome.
Giving equally what is known,
Forbidding a glimmer of darker shades;
Light transmitting upon further empty.
Struggle lies upon a beaten path,
yet weary is the strongest to hold.
Through transition flows on reliance,
unforgiving is a twinkle in retreats eye,
Carry on furthermore for the coming of the tide
For the winds of change
Move us all.
©2005-2009 ~BitterNBrokenAngl
:iconbitternbrokenangl:

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Written late at night, I really dont even remember doing it...haha...lemme know what you think!!

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that is a mad good poem! i enjoy this part

Through transition flows on reliance,
unforgiving is a twinkle in retreats eye,
Carry on furthermore for the coming of the tide

very good, keep it up!@
:iconbitternbrokenangl:
thank you darling!! You are so wonderful :D :glomp:

And also thank you for the :+fav: !!

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Walking away I see the pain you put me through// Lost in your game to change the same// Forever gone, forever you
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baby i have yet to find a parallel to your writing style.. this piece really illustrates the power you have in your thoughts.

Love you baby.

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But still there's a problem that leaves you gasping for air
You look for some meaning, blank smiles are all that's there
And still water stales a soft summer breeze
You cling to your hopes while your drop to your knees
There's no Substance. (no substa
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wow, i've been going through your gallery and i can tell how you've matured over the past couple years in this poem! This is wonderfully writ, great words, perfect imagery and a nice flow. =)

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"Um, Helloo?" -Dane Cook

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